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feedback plz

cosmicdawnseriescosmicdawnseries Posts: 259
edited February 6 in Art Studio

Need any and all feedback on this scene so far to help improve it 

 

 

thanks :) 

Post edited by Richard Haseltine on

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  • Richard HaseltineRichard Haseltine Posts: 108,967

    Moved to Art Studio since it is a (broadly) non-technical question, and not a Daz Studio application question as such.

  • nonesuch00nonesuch00 Posts: 18,795
    edited February 7

    The script is interesting, the cutting between the people worked, it took me a minute to figure out who was who, but the animations need improvement. You need to really up the realism & then the render time blows up on you OR you can do the opposite, convert your scene to Filatoon and people will allow less than perfect animation.  

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  • cosmicdawnseriescosmicdawnseries Posts: 259

    Thank you, yes, I'm still learning to animate, it's really hard xD been told my animations are robotic :/ I'm trying to improve as I make the story as I go along, and maybe one day use Blender, but thank you for the feedback 

  • nonesuch00nonesuch00 Posts: 18,795
    edited February 8

    cosmicdawnseries said:

    Thank you, yes, I'm still learning to animate, it's really hard xD been told my animations are robotic :/ I'm trying to improve as I make the story as I go along, and maybe one day use Blender, but thank you for the feedback 

    They are, they are too still and then suddenly: movement. How about making them MORE robotic, and using robots or android instead as your characters.

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  • David RDavid R Posts: 467

    You need to try to vary the speed of your actions.  Short, quick gestures vs drawn out ones.  You need to master ease-in and ease-out.

  • cosmicdawnseriescosmicdawnseries Posts: 259

    yeah its very hard to do :/ I'm trying to learn by watching videos and trying to remake the animations 

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