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Alita: Battle angle Face (give me your honest opinion)

JMC3DXJMC3DX Posts: 0
in The Commons

Hi Guys,

Give me your honost opinion, What do you think of the Alita version i've made here.

The me know you thoughts and improvement you might think of.

Any critics are welcome.

Thanks

Alita edit.png
3840 x 2160 - 7M
salazar-alita.jpg
859 x 423 - 146K

Comments

  • fastbike1fastbike1 Posts: 4,082

    I think it's a good start. I think the face should be wider across the eyes and a bit shorter hairline to chin.

  • Subtropic PixelSubtropic Pixel Posts: 2,403

    I like it a lot.  Did you intend for the eyes to be so big?

  • CybersoxCybersox Posts: 9,913
    edited November 2018

    The movie version's face is a different shape... rounder, shorter and more heart shaped whereas yours is oval... note how the ears stick out on the movie image versus flat to the skull in yours.  As a result, your nose is a bit too long and the mouth a bit too large as they are filling in space that doesn't exist on the LA model.  Also, the eyebrows are lower compared to the eyes in the movie version, again the result of there being too much forehead space to fill.  I also suspect that if you shorten the face and make it rounder you will find the eyes to still seem a bit too smal as it looks to me as if they have widened the actress' whole head a bit to accomodate the eyes, as the movie version's are so large that they couldn't sit in a normal skull socket and be recessed that far back in the head.

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  • sausagemix_d9e00246a7sausagemix_d9e00246a7 Posts: 34

    How are you able to copyright an already copyrighted character that has a manga and an upcoming film? If its just the image that your copyrighting you still have the name/title from the film.

  • kyoto kidkyoto kid Posts: 42,392
    edited November 2018

    ...in the photo the centre of her upper lip curves slightly upwards and the corners of her mouth are a bit lower.

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  • ServantServant Posts: 772

    Jaw line would need to be adjusted as yours is currently more square jawed than the film version. Seems to be a slightly smaller mouth, too, and the nose is more rounded and less pronounced (might be the lighting, though). Still, it's pretty close.yes

  • nDelphinDelphi Posts: 1,974

    Excellent work, especially if you are just using dialed moprhs.

  • nicsttnicstt Posts: 11,715

    If she's meant to be styialised then she looks great.

    Personally, I don't like large eyes are usually reduce them in size on characters that have them.

    What are you intending to achieve? An exact copy? Or an interpretation?

  • FauvistFauvist Posts: 2,290

    The original's teeth protrude more.

  • Seven193Seven193 Posts: 1,156
    edited April 2019
    The Alita movie character is fully CG, from head to toe, but I'm sure they didn't replace all of her facial features.
    Post edited by Seven193 on
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