Opening credits. Is this too hazy?

Sentinel-3

This scene is sharp, but I added the gleam to it to create rays off of the metallic letters.But I think it makes it too soft.

Second, I want the first voice credit to show at about 41 seconds, when the title is in view, and the rest of the main actors, and then when it goes black I want to fill it is with stylized cartoon action showing androids toiling and warring for us. The credits will last as long as the music, and will end with a one-paragraph intro.

Too much?

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kb96oabr0cg

The DigiVault

Awesome! I like the gleams. Excellent animation on that droid. How did you do that?

FirstBastion

Great piece of music, it really sets the tone for the visuals, and I agree the search animations work very well with the panning camera. The whole thing has great production value. What did you render with?
Looking forward to see what comes next.

Steve K

Looks good to me, no problems. Nice music, is it royalty free? I have a LOT of royalty free music, most from Digital Juice, and it sounds familiar ... I may have it but its tough to search on "sounds like ..."

:P

Deanpw

Looks really nice! I don't think it would be too much as everything blends really well! I wouldn't worry too much about the length of the opening credits either as the quality of your work is really good! Keep going!