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Advice? Feedback?

jason-2455927jason-2455927 Posts: 51
in Art Studio

So after a lot of learning I've just finished a render that I would like to share. It's still not where I want it but I think I may just be being too hard on it. What are your thoughts? Any feedback positive or negative? Any advice?

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  • clcny20clcny20 Posts: 176

    Congrats on the first render.

    My biggest take from this is the angle of the render, and the fact that a lot of it is empty space to the right, which pulls my focus away from the subject on the left.

  • jason-2455927jason-2455927 Posts: 51
    clcny20 said:

    Congrats on the first render.

    My biggest take from this is the angle of the render, and the fact that a lot of it is empty space to the right, which pulls my focus away from the subject on the left.

    Thanks, I felt something was off in the composition. I'll have to work on that.
  • HylasHylas Posts: 5,242
    edited December 2020

    Materials:

    - One wall looks very different than the other, which doesn't make much sense

    - The throne and especially the pillar look plastic and probably need a shader

     

    Lighting:

    - Overall not too bad, but a little flat

    - Light temparature is a little chilly for my taste, but that's subjective

    - The reflection on the pillar makes no sense for an indoor scene

     

    Composition:

    - Figure is cropped oddly

    - Figure is quite small, we see a lot of empty space in background. I would either zoom in closer to the figure, or make the background more engaging.

     

    Storytelling:

    - I can't tell what the figure is doing or what he's thinking/feeling.

     

    I hope some of that was useful! Have fun!

    Post edited by Hylas on
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