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Looking for some critiques on my newest render!

Dingo_GambinoDingo_Gambino Posts: 5
in Art Studio
Hello! This is my second forum post, but I just wanted to share what is one of my most detailed renders so far pose-wise, and I was curious if I could get some general critiques/pointers from anyone on the pose posture, shading, expressions and lights. It's for an upcoming book cover! The picture is attached. Thanks for your time!

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  • lilweeplilweep Posts: 2,792
    edited October 2020

    the pose of the male looks very contorted and unnatural to me and there are many mesh intersections happening.  I think it hurts the visual legibility of the scene and its difficult to understand what's happening.

    I think both of these figures dont seem to be interacting with (1) eachother and (2) the environment

    also i question the choice of camera angle... it's quite a boring angle.  I always cringe inwardly when i see someone put a camera directly parallel to the lines of the subject unless there is good reason to, especially if it's supposed to be a candid shot.

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  • Dingo_GambinoDingo_Gambino Posts: 5
    lilweep said:

    the pose of the male looks very contorted and unnatural to me and there are many mesh intersections happening.  I think it hurts the visual legibility of the scene and its difficult to understand what's happening.

    I think both of these figures dont seem to be interacting with (1) eachother and (2) the environment

    also i question the choice of camera angle... it's quite a boring angle.  I always cringe inwardly when i see someone put a camera directly parallel to the lines of the subject unless there is good reason to, especially if it's supposed to be a candid shot.

    Okay! I'll definitely take this into account and make some adjustments. As for the camera angle, I wanted to capture both of their faces and expressions, as I hopped that would help provide some context to the picture, but it seems I still have a ways to go.

     

    Thanks for the suggestions!

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