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Posted: 17 October 2012 07:25 AM   [ Ignore ]
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Okay, as the thread title says….I’m looking for some input on the tweaks to my current Sci Fi Novel cover. I wanted to update it but still keep the ‘feel’ of the original. I built the original back in March on a ‘shoestring’ budget before I found DAZ. I bought the armor and sword from Dreamstime and cobbled them together on Photoshop. It worked…but the armor was nothing like the one in my head (or hopefully) in the story. I have a sequel coming out next month with the new logo—- so I tried to blend the old with the new.
This is the eBook cover version. The left image is my original and the right the updated version.
Suggestions? Thanks in advance.

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Posted: 17 October 2012 07:41 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 1 ]
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aemccullough - 17 October 2012 07:25 AM

Okay, as the thread title says….I’m looking for some input on the tweaks to my current Sci Fi Novel cover. I wanted to update it but still keep the ‘feel’ of the original. I built the original back in March on a ‘shoestring’ budget before I found DAZ. I bought the armor and sword from Dreamstime and cobbled them together on Photoshop. It worked…but the armor was nothing like the one in my head (or hopefully) in the story. I have a sequel coming out next month with the new logo—- so I tried to blend the old with the new.
This is the eBook cover version. The left image is my original and the right the updated version.
Suggestions? Thanks in advance.

It is not very clear that he’s firing a gun from his left hand-I would suggest using a more metallic surface setting, maybe even some metal shaders, on the gun, and rotating the camera slightly so that we’re not looking at the gun/discharge headon.

If the lightning on the sword is postwork, you could try duplicating the lightning layer, blurring it slightly, setting to screen, and adjusting layer opacity to taste.  This might give you a more glowy, plasma like effect.

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Posted: 17 October 2012 08:10 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 2 ]
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background good
yellow blaster doesn’t work at all

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Posted: 17 October 2012 08:24 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 3 ]
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Maybe brighten the foreground, he blends in since he is all black. It’s daytime, so he should be better lit.

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Posted: 17 October 2012 01:27 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 4 ]
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bigh - 17 October 2012 08:10 AM

background good
yellow blaster doesn’t work at all


Okay….here are a few tweaks on the blaster.

Odaa said:  It is not very clear that he’s firing a gun from his left hand-I would suggest using a more metallic surface setting, maybe even some metal shaders, on the gun, and rotating the camera slightly so that we’re not looking at the gun/discharge headon.

How’s this…

Jake_Russel said: Maybe brighten the foreground, he blends in since he is all black. It’s daytime, so he should be better lit.

I tweaked the lighting and the metal of the armor and the angle of Spartan.

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Posted: 17 October 2012 01:37 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 5 ]
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aemccullough - 17 October 2012 01:27 PM

I tweaked the lighting and the metal of the armor and the angle of Spartan.

Wow, that’s much better. Now he needs a slight orange tent over him since his surroundings are primarily orange. Maybe a lens flare off his visor too.

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Posted: 17 October 2012 02:03 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 6 ]
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Jake__Russel - 17 October 2012 01:37 PM

Wow, that’s much better. Now he needs a slight orange tent over him since his surroundings are primarily orange. Maybe a lens flare off his visor too.

I was thinking the same but had to set it aside for a bit. It was taking too much time from my writing.
Already deep into working on my next novel. I will definantly have a cover contest for this story.

I’m not sure if I need to zoom in a bit more or not. Hmmm…..

BTW—if anyone is interested….The Last Spartan: Different Paths is FREE to download today on Amazon.

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Posted: 18 October 2012 04:11 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 7 ]
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Here are the latest tweaks.
I added a couple of blood red spotlights for a hint of ‘red’ tinting.
Tweaked the camera angle and added some starships in the background.
Input?

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Posted: 18 October 2012 06:23 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 8 ]
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much better

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Posted: 19 October 2012 01:39 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 9 ]
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Much better, but I think his pose could be improved it doesn’t look natural at the moment, his legs need to be furthur apart more as if he’s in a stance rather than just standing around.
I would also bring his right forearm down.

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Posted: 19 October 2012 02:51 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 10 ]
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scorpio64dragon - 19 October 2012 01:39 AM

Much better, but I think his pose could be improved it doesn’t look natural at the moment, his legs need to be furthur apart more as if he’s in a stance rather than just standing around.
I would also bring his right forearm down.

Thanks…I’ll try that later today after work.

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Posted: 23 October 2012 05:00 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 11 ]
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Total newbie here, but it looks to me that the lightning is not “attached” to the sword - maybe the previous suggestion about post-processing a glow on the blade?

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