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Supersuit renders by XoechZ - comments are welcome
Posted: 21 October 2012 05:46 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 16 ]
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XoechZ - 19 October 2012 12:27 PM

Ok, this one follows the rule of thirds (as close as I could in a first try). It looks good to me, but on the other side there is so much “empty space” at the right side. That would not happen if the figure was in the middle. What do you think?


This is my favourite so far. If you don’t like the empty space, do something subtle there, something that will draw your eye to the character or contrast with the character either through light/shadow, pose or color. Some ideas: cast the figure’s shadow across the empty space, add a painting, plant, window or statue. If you give the statue a subtle tone that blends well with the background, it won’t distract from the character but then you can play with a subtle message in the statue’s pose.

Just some ideas to work with.

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Posted: 21 October 2012 08:22 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 17 ]
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Good stuff! I particularly like the guy with the interesting reflections, the one you call “another hero,” and the woman at the Moon Gate. The Rule of Thirds is definitely working for you. smile

The Supersuit is a lot of fun to play with, and I enjoy seeing what others achieve with it. Keep up the good work!

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Posted: 22 October 2012 04:21 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 18 ]
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Thank you all for your kind words. Yes, the Supersuit is a lot of fun and opens almost endless possibilities. I really like it and there will be more renders… grin

Oh, and if you have any suggestions to improve my renders, please let me know.

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Posted: 22 October 2012 02:25 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 19 ]
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Hm, I wish I could have done this one better. Maybe I´ll try it again when I am more advanced. Or I need some better lights…

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Posted: 10 November 2012 02:14 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 20 ]
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Ok, here I have re-worked my first image from this thread. I think it looks much better now. Not yet perfect, but better.

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Posted: 10 November 2012 04:03 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 21 ]
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XoechZ - 10 November 2012 02:14 PM

Ok, here I have re-worked my first image from this thread. I think it looks much better now. Not yet perfect, but better.

that is so much better now, everything works. You could have used the arch to frame her and given the colour of the background her suit would have contrasted nicely.

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Posted: 11 November 2012 03:39 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 22 ]
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Thank you!

I know, it´s a long and hard way to perfection. But at least I´m on the road grin

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Posted: 11 November 2012 05:51 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 23 ]
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XoechZ exactly that is a great attitude and IMHO you are on the road heading in the right direction.

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Posted: 13 November 2012 08:18 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 24 ]
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Here my latest. Come and get it - if you dare…

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Posted: 14 November 2012 10:44 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 25 ]
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A new one. Looks like a movie poster.

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Posted: 15 November 2012 11:44 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 26 ]
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Just playing with her new power.

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Posted: 16 November 2012 12:57 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 27 ]
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Another one. Some kind of modern ninja.

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Posted: 17 November 2012 12:41 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 28 ]
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Today something funny:

His wife said: “You have to take my supersuit if you have to save the world today. Yours is still in the dryer.”

Later this day he really had to save the world. Poor hero. But at least it was easy. All the enemy died under a heavy laughing attack! grin

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Posted: 17 November 2012 06:30 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 29 ]
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No more comments, suggestions, opinions?

Ok, never mind. Here is another one. A soldier in a mystical light scene. No postwork on this.

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Posted: 18 November 2012 12:57 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 30 ]
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Well, I think you have the Comicbook thing down pat with the Supersuit. Lets see some Fights and stuff now.

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