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Posted: 14 September 2012 11:25 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 16 ]
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Yes indeed. I see much more detail on the nearest critter.

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Posted: 15 September 2012 12:26 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 17 ]
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Much better… And Its defininately still my favorite cheese I also agree with Khory.

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Posted: 15 September 2012 07:26 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 18 ]
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That’s looking pretty good.  The details are definitely showing up better now.  I still consider AvP one of my favorite games.  Extremely scary and intense to play as a Marine.

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Posted: 15 September 2012 09:22 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 19 ]
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flashback - 14 September 2012 11:06 PM

Better?

Yes, much.

You might also consider bringing the camera in a bit closer, fill the image with the aliens and less with the open space of the corridor. That’s just a personal preference, so take it or leave.

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Posted: 15 September 2012 10:11 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 20 ]
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Big improvement. Well done.

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