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aemccullough - 27 August 2012 05:30 AM

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More good suggestions.
I am really considering the contest idea. I might even add that as a component of the contest. Checking with one of the forum adminstrators now about the idea. BTW—I just scrolled thru your ‘fake magazine covers’—there are some good ones!

Thanks. What’s your series about? Give us a quick summery.

Thanks for all the wonderful suggestions. I have decieded to have a contest and started a new thread.
I hope everyone who particpated in this thread will chime in on the contest.

But to answer your question: Sci-Fi – the story mostly takes place on Titan (one of Jupiter’s moons) in the year 2212. Think icy surface & bio-domes for habitats. Ex-Marine Staff Sgt. Scott ‘DJ’ DeJarnette – is contacted by his 12 year old daughter via UR-L8 her ‘babysitting bot’ (think yellow and black boxy robot w/ treads) that she and his ex-wife are being abused by her step-father.

The problem is two-fold 1) according to the Coalition, DJ has no parental rights. They were stripped from him when he was thrown in New Leavenworth 2) His ex-wife’s husband is very rich and powerful. He pretty much runs the Saturn System as his own personal fiefdom and DJ knows that he will be arrested the moment he steps foot on Titan. With the help of his friend, Iaido ‘Achilles’ Spartan, he goes undercover as the bounty hunter ‘Red Falcon’ an old cover identity of Spartan. Unfortunately since he hadn’t used it in many years, someone else has been passing themselves off as the Red Falcon but supposedly, the doppelganger is in Confederate space atm.

Arriving on Titan, DJ gains the help of El Gato, a rogue CIA agent (female – originally blonde but can change her hair color with a simple thought) and Jagger Jax, a former pirate and thief – now reformed and looking for a new career away from the notoriety of his past. For DJ to rescue (ie kidnap since this isn’t a legal bounty) his daughter, he must avoid the Saturn Sheriffs, make (and keep) a deal with the Cartel (the Mob in space) and escape Titan City before the upstart Falcon arrives.

I made a possible Red Falcon Symbol or Crest. This would be on his armor. But you have other “teams”. What are their names. Also, can you list the main characters of your story and what armor they wear and what color (since I assume red falcon armor is red)?

Jake….sounds like you know something about these programs.

Let me see…in the current novella - DJ is the main protagonist. He is an ex-Marine, the ground forces of the Fleet, going undercover as a bounty hunter. In my future, UNCF—United Nations Coalition Forces—is the prominent power on Earth. I have the Coalition military divided into Fleet (ie Navy and Airforce) and Strike (Army and any other ground forces they absorbed).

The other main two sidekicks are: Stephanie ie ‘El Gato’ a CIA—Coalition Intelligence Agency - agent that has gone rogue (kinda - she still works and reports to her handler, he just no longer reports to the Agency). She wears something closer to the outfit of ‘The Black Widow’ from the recent Avengers movie. She is also a master at Parkour and several other martial arts.

Then there is Jagger Jax - notorious thief and pirate. He was cleared by Presidential pardon in the first book when it became known that a doppelganger had been masquerading as him for almost a year. Unfortunately for Jax, everyone in the Underworld thinks he’s a squealer, so they won’t deal with him (on pain of death) and the general public recognizes him everywhere he goes.

Iaido ‘Achilles’ Spartan - only makes several appearances in this novella. He would be the one wearing the black and silver Coalition Rapier (or Katana) Armor w/ the skull (think Punisher) on the opaque faceplate of his helmet. He would also have prominentlyly displayed on his armor an Omega symbol in homage to his lost squadmates—Omega Squadron. After all, he is the Last Spartan (for more on this see my 1st book).

On the antagonists side - we have the SS - Saturn Sheriffs - the police force of the Saturn System and the SIS - Saturn Intelligence Service - the covert and enforcement arm of the SS. Yes, they use the stylied twin lightning bolts as thier symbol.

I hope this helps.

aemccullough - 28 August 2012 12:08 PM

Jake….sounds like you know something about these programs.

Let me see…in the current novella - DJ is the main protagonist. He is an ex-Marine, the ground forces of the Fleet, going undercover as a bounty hunter. In my future, UNCF—United Nations Coalition Forces—is the prominent power on Earth. I have the Coalition military divided into Fleet (ie Navy and Airforce) and Strike (Army and any other ground forces they absorbed).

The other main two sidekicks are: Stephanie ie ‘El Gato’ a CIA—Coalition Intelligence Agency - agent that has gone rogue (kinda - she still works and reports to her handler, he just no longer reports to the Agency). She wears something closer to the outfit of ‘The Black Widow’ from the recent Avengers movie. She is also a master at Parkour and several other martial arts.

Then there is Jagger Jax - notorious thief and pirate. He was cleared by Presidential pardon in the first book when it became known that a doppelganger had been masquerading as him for almost a year. Unfortunately for Jax, everyone in the Underworld thinks he’s a squealer, so they won’t deal with him (on pain of death) and the general public recognizes him everywhere he goes.

Iaido ‘Achilles’ Spartan - only makes several appearances in this novella. He would be the one wearing the black and silver Coalition Rapier (or Katana) Armor w/ the skull (think Punisher) on the opaque faceplate of his helmet. He would also have prominentlyly displayed on his armor an Omega symbol in homage to his lost squadmates—Omega Squadron. After all, he is the Last Spartan (for more on this see my 1st book).

On the antagonists side - we have the SS - Saturn Sheriffs - the police force of the Saturn System and the SIS - Saturn Intelligence Service - the covert and enforcement arm of the SS. Yes, they use the stylied twin lightning bolts as thier symbol.

I hope this helps.

O yes, this is perfect. Your books are sounding more and more interesting. I think I may need to buy one and read it. But one more thing. I assume you have a description of their appearance (like do they have a beard, scar, muscular or skinny, curtain hair style or color) because from my experience with writing, I know you have already described their appearance in book 1. So making a cover with characters that don’t match your already fleshed out characters will not work for a cover for the next book unless you say they changed appearance.

So what does DJ “look” like: Since he is an ex-marine, he probably looks muscular and hard edged, right?

Stephanie is blond but can change hair color. So I assume you want her to look basically like The black widow (long-ish hair style and black skintight suit)? If so, that’s all I need to know.

Jagger Jax (Cool name by the way) is a thief and a “squealer” so he must be more slim and quick on his feet. Maybe a little shorter than DJ?

Iaido is like a background character so he’s more mysterious. I assume he has no identity since he wears the suit all the time? Just guessing. Since he only appears once in a while, he would be known as the “black suit guy” and not have much description about his appearance to far beyond that.

Saturn Sheriffs are self explanatory (futuristic cop outfits)

SIS have similar appearance to the SS suits but with the lightning bolt as their emblem.

Reason why I ask this is because I am trying to make a group cover image that summarizes the characters in the story. Just need a little more info on how the main people look so to stay true to your story.

Sounds good.
Let me see if I can clarify your questions - DJ was introduced in the 1st novel this way:

A broad-shouldered man with a friendly round face stepped up to the table. “And there would’ve been more trouble. The word is out. You could make someone a very rich man. Your bounty has been raised to one and a quarter million credits, dead or alive.”
“Hello DJ.” Iaido lifted the second mug of beer and held it out.

And here is how DJ is introduced in this novella:

Retired Staff Sergeant Scott DeJarnette sat in a booth of the small deli and stared at his pitiful lunch. It was actually a very appetizing looking salad but then, he hated salads. To him, this was rabbit food. He wanted meat, potatoes, bread, pasta…real sustenance, not this healthy stuff.
Cathy, the busty brunette who owned and ran the Cat Box Deli, smiled at him when she noticed that he hadn’t touched his lunch. “Dee-jay, is something wrong?”
Picking up his fork, DJ took a deep breath before taking a bite. “I hate salads.”
Not having any customers to wait on at the moment, Cathy slid into the opposite side of the booth and leaned forward slightly showing off her god given wares. “Then why did you order it? You know I have some wonderful sandwiches.”
DJ nodded. He did know that. Which was the primary reason he came to this diner, the other reasons weren’t so simple. The Cat Box was a regular deli. No androids. No automation. Nothing fancy, just a simple, plain deli. Cathy made everything by hand right in front of her customers. The menu consisted of soups, sandwiches, salads, burgers and fries…good old traditional ‘American’ fare. This was the only restaurant in all of Haven that specialized in this type of food. It reminded him of home and the times he spent with his family before the war. Realizing that Cathy was genuinely concerned with his dislike for her food, he leaned back and slapped his plump belly. “Recent events have convinced me that I need to lose a bit of weight.”

BTW—once DJ dons the Red Falcon armor, he is rarely seen outside it (since he would be arrested on sight anywhere in the Saturn System). The Red Falcon has its own past and complete identity.
As to Iaido, here is how he is described by the Feds in the 1st novel (sans armor):

“The subject is one Iaido Achilles Spartan, apparent age mid-thirties although there is no date of birth in his files. The subject stands exactly six feet tall, weighs approximately two-hundred and twenty-five pounds, well-built but not overly muscular. He has a shaved head, a coal black goatee and mustache both neatly trimmed. His eyes are steel grey and alert. A large scar runs vertically down the left side of his face, due to the whiteness of it; I would judge it to be many years old. A tattoo was visible on the subject, a glyph of some sort on the base of the neck surrounded by tribal markings overtop an interface port.”
Agent Smith paused as he accessed more background information.
“He is a registered galactic and intergalactic bounty hunter. According to records provided by the Galactic Marshals, he has a one hundred percent capture rate and no strikes against him for excessive force. However, their information on him only stretches back five years but there is a note in their files that his background check is good and approved.”
Special Agent Johnson maneuvered their black skimmer into traffic. “Anything else of note?”
“Hmm…” Agent Smith thought for a few seconds before adding, “He stands with his weight evenly distributed on both feet and he moves exceptionally quiet.”
“And what does that tell you? Remember your training.”
“There is an eighty percent chance that our subject has studied the martial arts.”
Special Agent Johnson shook his head. “Wrong; one hundred percent chance trained, probably a martial arts master.”

And what the SWAT officers saw when Iaido stepped out in his armor:

As the gangplank touched the hangar deck and the hatch opened, a fully armored figured stepped into view. Even to the SWAT officers, the bounty hunter looked daunting. His armor was primarily black and silver with highlights of scarlet. It seemed to be form-fitting and more anatomically correct than their bulky SWAT armor. Although his face was hidden by an opaque dome, a floating skull seemed to grin at the officers. His hands were empty at the moment but several weapons, including twin blasters at his hips and the hilt of a sword were all clearly visible and within easy reach. 
After a moment Sgt. Hamilton added, “But sir… he’s only a bounty hunter?”
“That might be his job for the moment but that isn’t who he is and trust me sergeant, you don’t ever want to be on his bad side.”

How’s that?

So DJ is:

-Broad-shouldered (I take it as a husky look)
-Retired so he is an older man (Mid 50’s)
-Has a slight belly
-In some kind of uniform

So Laido is:

-Bald
-Muscular in an athletic way
-Beard (goattee + mustache)
-Black hair
-In his 30’s (just a guess)
-Hard edged and rugged (as I suspected)
-Scar across face
-Tattoo on neck
-Probably very laid back appearance (tank top, jeans, cigarette in mouth)

(Laido sounds like a really cool character)

The red falcon suit:

-Laido wears the “Red falcon” armor (which is shiny black, with red “highlights”)
-Skull face on mask
-(Reminds me a lot of Raiden from Metal Gear solid by the way)

If this is right, I think I have all I need. Thanks.

Jake__Russel - 28 August 2012 03:56 PM

So DJ is:

-Broad-shouldered (I take it as a husky look)
-Retired so he is an older man (Mid 50’s)
-Has a slight belly
-In some kind of uniform

So Laido is:
-Bald
-Muscular in an athletic way
-Beard (goattee + mustache)
-Black hair
-In his 30’s (just a guess)
-Hard edged and rugged (as I suspected)
-Scar across face
-Tattoo on neck
-Probably very laid back appearance (tank top, jeans, cigarette in mouth)

(Laido sounds like a really cool character)

The red falcon suit:
-Laido wears the “Red falcon” armor (which is shiny black, with red “highlights”)
-Skull face on mask
-(Reminds me a lot of Raiden from Metal Gear solid by the way)

If this is right, I think I have all I need. Thanks.

You are getting close. Actually, DJ is in his 30s also. He is ‘retired’ due to the fact that the military threw him in New Leavenworth since he shot his commanding officer during the war. Since the CO was fleeing (ie abandoning his post/command) at the time he wouldnt just lost a stripe. But the young LT was the son of an influential politicain, so DJ was ‘retired’ and had to serve 5 yrs in New Leavenworth.

Also, DJ wears the Red Falcon armor - now. It was once Iaido’s but he passed it on and wears the more advance ARC suit (Raiper/Katana look of armor). BTW - Spartan’s name was originally 1A1-DO - but that looks close to iaido = the way of the resting blade.
Never played Metal Gear solid but it sounds like you pretty much have it down.