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Posted: 26 May 2012 08:17 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 16 ]
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3ch0_419 - 26 May 2012 07:34 PM
Here is the image I started with and what I've done so far,



3cho I really like the lighting changes you have done. smile The added explosion and the grenades are great, though I still feel like the floor is still bare.
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Posted: 26 May 2012 08:20 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 17 ]
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I think this might be last change I make to my image, especially since the deadline is tomorrow. I don't think it is as great as it could be but after four tries getting this guy posed and daz crashing on me; I need to stop and work with what I got.

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Posted: 26 May 2012 11:58 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 18 ]
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Angie Tucker - 26 May 2012 08:17 PM
3ch0_419 - 26 May 2012 07:34 PM
Here is the image I started with and what I've done so far,



3cho I really like the lighting changes you have done. smile The added explosion and the grenades are great, though I still feel like the floor is still bare.


Thank you Angie. I'll see if I have the time to add on to it befor the deadline.
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Posted: 27 May 2012 04:03 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 19 ]
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I took note of all the great advice i received from my first post and came up with this.

Hope you like it.

Mr Hyde in trouble................again
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Posted: 27 May 2012 08:52 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 20 ]
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version3 - 27 May 2012 04:03 AM
I took note of all the great advice i received from my first post and came up with this.

Hope you like it.

Mr Hyde in trouble................again


i think the angle on the cop flying thing could be better. love the look of the rest of it, Hyde looks like he is driving right out of the picture, looks great.
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Posted: 27 May 2012 01:56 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 21 ]
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ok, so I have ditched the elemental idea for the time being, and went back to the basics of design. I have focused my attention on 8 Principals of art: balance, emphasis, harmony, variety, gradation, movement, rhythm, and proportion. As well as the 7 Elements of Art: Color, Value, Line, Texture, Shape, Form, and Space in order to improve my composition abilities. feedback is more than welcome!
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Posted: 27 May 2012 02:30 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 22 ]
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Ooh I like that, and I love the colour. Blue is my fav color. cool smile
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Posted: 27 May 2012 03:00 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 23 ]
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LycanthropeX - 27 May 2012 08:52 AM
version3 - 27 May 2012 04:03 AM
I took note of all the great advice i received from my first post and came up with this.

Hope you like it.

Mr Hyde in trouble................again


i think the angle on the cop flying thing could be better. love the look of the rest of it, Hyde looks like he is driving right out of the picture, looks great.


Thanks LycanthropeX for the comment and I agree with you, as it is the cop looks more like a spectator than a participant which is not what I wanted.

That is a beautifull render sweetluv40, blue is my favourite colour as well.
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Posted: 27 May 2012 03:17 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 24 ]
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Sweetluv40 that is one well done render. Love the lay out and colors.
version3 Last one looks very good. If you gave the cop some action like pointing to Hide or to the side, "Pull over!" it would be much better.
Angie Tucker I think if you pulled it in on just the upper half of this image it would be so much stronger. It's good, but the upper half seen by it self really conveys the action.

All good works. I'm very happy to see new users that can do renders of this quality the first time.
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Posted: 27 May 2012 03:29 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 25 ]
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sweetluv40 that's a beautiful image.
Version3 and Angie those are both better. Well done.
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Posted: 27 May 2012 05:44 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 26 ]
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sweetluv40 - 27 May 2012 01:56 PM
ok, so I have ditched the elemental idea for the time being, and went back to the basics of design. I have focused my attention on 8 Principals of art: balance, emphasis, harmony, variety, gradation, movement, rhythm, and proportion. As well as the 7 Elements of Art: Color, Value, Line, Texture, Shape, Form, and Space in order to improve my composition abilities. feedback is more than welcome!
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This is really nice. smile The colour, the expression, and the flowing fabric.
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Posted: 27 May 2012 05:48 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 27 ]
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version3 - 27 May 2012 04:03 AM
I took note of all the great advice i received from my first post and came up with this.

Hope you like it.

Mr Hyde in trouble................again


I love Mr. Hyde in this image, though the left side of the image is not as engaging as the right. Honestly with some smoke I think you could just use Mr Hyde with this angle and set up. If you want to keep the cop part, maybe some gun shots whizzing through the air?
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Posted: 27 May 2012 05:54 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 28 ]
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Frank and Jaderail, Thank you. I'll see what I can do to crop it and get it up. Now that I don't have my face in it I can see what you guys mean about closing in.
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Posted: 27 May 2012 07:28 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 29 ]
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Angie Tucker - 27 May 2012 05:54 PM
Frank and Jaderail, Thank you. I'll see what I can do to crop it and get it up. Now that I don't have my face in it I can see what you guys mean about closing in.
I understand why you do not see it at first. You spent all that time setting up the scene with the props and sets. It is normal to want all the work you did to be in the finished render. Just remember this one little tip from a comic hero, Stan Lee, does it really ADD to the Image you want to show? Or does it just show all you can do? I still have trouble with "just the Shot" myself.
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Posted: 28 May 2012 05:00 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 30 ]
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Hi everyone, I think this will be my finished version of Mr Hyde vs. The Law. Do you think I went overboard on the explosions?

I have taken Daz to a new level with the purchase of a 24" monitor today, for the first time I can see all my tabs and the scene at the same time. WOW what a difference it makes.
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