Hi, well a friend of mine died tragically last week. We buried him on Tuesday. He was 39, an ace surfer, and a member of our kneeboard club. We held a paddle out for him on Sunday and eighty surfers arrived at 5.30 am in the dark middle of winter to pay their respects. That’s not counting the friends who stood and shivered on the beach. The funeral spilled out onto the street and I stood in the rain with about forty others and watched the proceedings on a a big plasma screen… ahh technology and death, who would have thought….
So I got in im my head to do an in memoriam poster. It’s been a struggle, the render times as they are for a big project. Anyway,below there’s a picture of Shannon I took in 2004. Oddly enough my first attempt at morphing mike into Shannon’s head wasn’t bad, but the finished image compostion etc was looking a bit silly. (Plus the board logo is back to front:) )
so I played around yesterday and finally realised it would be better not to have his face in it at all. So After working on it all day to day I came up with this. (The second last image at the end of post)
Now so a kneeboarder rides on his knees. The image is supposed to be of Shannon in the ‘barrel’. His left hand is doing “Hang Loose”.
I think a surfer would recognise it (the barrel, tube, cover up, in the green room) but don’t know about ‘laymen’. It’s not meant to be photo realistic, just to suggest the idea. In the end it will be a poster for theother guys in the club.(I hope) I realise there is mesh error in the board and I tried to hide it in post As I did with the lousy texturing (You can see these both in the last image)
So my questions, can you tell what is going on? Would the lettering be better left clean without the spray and stuff around it, Does the image hold together stylistically? Any suggestions on the font lettering design? Are the bubbles acceptable or could they do with some work? And his neck looks weird to me…
And any well meaning critiques are welcome. Thanks for looking! PS: The above links take you to big files.
EDIT: The last image is just for scenery. I thought the forum resizing was working…? :(