It seems the nose is far too long, originally she has a child-like shortish nose with the septum shorter too:-), the dip from brow to nose happens much lower down. As a consequence of all this the lips might have to be moved up a tad.
Eyebrows are wider apart and have more arch too. Hope these observations are of use to you.
all observations are useful!
Eyebrows, I’ll see if I can adapt the texture for that… but you’re correct. I’ll take a look at shortening the nose, but that might involve shortening her chin even more, which I’m not sure I can do without bad deformations…
With regard to the nose, one of the things I looked at was that. I think this is actually an optical illusion because of the overlarge eyes in the drawings. Wile I’d love to be perfectly faithful to the original, that’s simply not possible without doing a lot of custom morph work… with the size of her eyes in my portrait, which are considerably smaller, everything else looks bigger.
You’re correct about the dip, by the way. Her forhead is also a bit too sloped and that has to do with it… I’m searching for the morphs to correct this…
EDIT: okay, adjusted the nose ridge and the forhead, also widened the space between the eyes… NOW I AM REALLY GOING BACK TO WORK ON HER HAIR!!!
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