Ayrton S.'s renders thread (newbie)

SkatingJesusSkatingJesus Posts: 51
edited December 1969 in Art Studio

Hi,

I'm a Daz user now for a month, and after a bit practice, I can now start to do some "quality" render pics.
As a newbie in 3d pose, I try to do all by myself, even light effect, probably the most difficult part in 3D!

This is now my first "worked" pic, that I simply called "Girl dancing in the street":
http://fav.me/d5ndowc

I tried to work on skin effect, with bump mapping on the girl's body. I see the light refraction to give this "oily" skin.
There is only 2 lights on this picture: a distant light (evening sun), and I used Uber, to avoid too dark shadows. I think it's not so bad, as I know realistic light presets are a lot more detailled and hard to render!

You would have recognize the properties of the pic:
Vanessa (V4.2)
Medieval Docks
Earane outfits.

(and the Gangnam pose in the background is mine! :D )

It's on my new deviantart gallery, I hope it's not a problem for the forum to create a link to another site, even a famous one like deviantart

Here is my profile:
http://skatingjesus.deviantart.com/

Feel free to comment and criticize my work , I want to improve as fast as possible!

girl_dancing_in_the_streets_by_skatingjesus-d5ndowc.jpg
1063 x 751 - 95K

Comments

  • IvyIvy Posts: 1,883
    edited December 1969

    ayrtons11 said:
    Hi,

    I'm a Daz user now for a month, and after a bit practice, I can now start to do some "quality" render pics.
    As a newbie in 3d pose, I try to do all by myself, even light effect, probably the most difficult part in 3D!

    This is now my first "worked" pic, that I simply called "Girl dancing in the street":
    http://fav.me/d5ndowc

    I tried to work on skin effect, with bump mapping on the girl's body. I see the light refraction to give this "oily" skin.
    There is only 2 lights on this picture: a distant light (evening sun), and I used Uber, to avoid too dark shadows. I think it's not so bad, as I know realistic light presets are a lot more detailled and hard to render!

    You would have recognize the properties of the pic:
    Vanessa (V4.2)
    Medieval Docks
    Earane outfits.

    (and the Gangnam pose in the background is mine! :D )

    nice work. and with even more practice think how good your gonna get .. Happy Rendering :)

    It's on my new deviantart gallery, I hope it's not a problem for the forum to create a link to another site, even a famous one like deviantart

    Here is my profile:
    http://skatingjesus.deviantart.com/

    Feel free to comment and criticize my work , I want to improve as fast as possible!

  • SkatingJesusSkatingJesus Posts: 51
    edited December 1969

    Thanks!

    Some new pics:

    more at my deviantart gallery:
    http://skatingjesus.deviantart.com/

    the_girl__the_dragon__and_the_trolls_001_by_skatingjesus-d5nr1nq.jpg
    900 x 506 - 60K
    the_girl_and_the_bird_003_by_skatingjesus-d5nfpba.jpg
    900 x 559 - 40K
  • Scott LivingstonScott Livingston Posts: 4,112
    edited December 1969

    You are getting very good, very quickly! :) Can't wait to see more.

    A few minor quibbles: the dancing girl's foot pose looks odd to me, and I like the depth of field but might prefer it if it weren't as strong... In the image with the dragon, I love the sense of drama and action, but what's really going on in the scene is kind of being obscured by the wide angle, special effects, and bright lighting on the dragon and the troll on the left-center. Can't find much wrong with the other...I love it as is.

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