Much better IMHO.
Changes made( don't know if they are visible ) Played with the lights and the surface tab mostly reflection and ambient for starters.
New version below the previous.
Look out for next months comp on some composition tips. I am slaving away getting things ready now.
Putting the main subject matter dead centre can work if you have a portrait aspect ratio but for wide-screen I would be using the rule of thirds meaning moving the dancer over to the right or left third of the image. For this image I would personally chose placing her in the right side third (our right). If that doesn't make sense then Google Rule of Thirds and all will become clearer.