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WIP THREAD FOR NEW USERS CONTEST, November, 2012
Posted: 09 November 2012 10:17 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 31 ]
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lol you should watch a movie with me some time, i have a notebook, i sit there making notes "ok establishing shot, 2 shot, reverse angle, close up, rev and close up."

I have notebooks full of stuff like that. I don't watch movies, i study them.
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Posted: 10 November 2012 05:05 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 32 ]
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I hear you...Chrsitine and I comment on CGI all the time now when watching moives etc and Christine doesn't do any digital artwork at all..
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Posted: 10 November 2012 06:53 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 33 ]
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you watch movies with a possessed car? awesome!!!!
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Posted: 10 November 2012 07:36 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 34 ]
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LOL Yeah scarey too.

Ouch just got slapped...but it's his fault dear
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Posted: 10 November 2012 07:53 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 35 ]
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Redone. Also, changed the lighting. Any input on that bit?
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Posted: 10 November 2012 07:56 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 36 ]
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wow that looks really dark now
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Posted: 10 November 2012 08:23 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 37 ]
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Okay here's a little bright image.
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Posted: 10 November 2012 01:25 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 38 ]
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I'd suggest putting a little more light on the dancer, make her stand out from the background more.
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Posted: 11 November 2012 06:41 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 39 ]
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Further progress.
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Posted: 11 November 2012 06:49 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 40 ]
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Are you cutting and pasting or are you doing Layered Renders? I would do layered. Just lock your Render camera then only render the parts one at a time. To lose the Blending artifacts render against a BLACK background in DS. That will prevent the edge highlights and allow the layers to blend better. Use the Same light set up in every render, and only add a extra light to highlight the dancer in the render of the Dancers render. Remove it again for other renders of things to be layered into the image.
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Posted: 13 November 2012 08:43 AM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 41 ]
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Fobok1 - 10 November 2012 01:25 PM
I'd suggest putting a little more light on the dancer, make her stand out from the background more.

I agree, especially on her face. It's coming along really well, though!
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Posted: 13 November 2012 03:13 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 42 ]
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Jaderail thank you. It worked wonderfully. Added the light as suggested and this is the result.
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Posted: 13 November 2012 04:10 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 43 ]
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Yes, looking Real good now. I still think you should Spot light the Dancer like the Guys at the table. Then It will really pop the scene from good to VERY good if not Great.
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Posted: 13 November 2012 04:27 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 44 ]
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I was looking for a place to post my render and found this thread, If it doesn't qualify for the contest that is fine but I would greatly appreciate any critiques. I haven't done any postwork other than put my name on it so any suggestions in that area would be appreciated. Thanx
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Posted: 13 November 2012 05:12 PM   [ Ignore ]   [ # 45 ]
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AJaxxxe - 13 November 2012 04:27 PM
I was looking for a place to post my render and found this thread, If it doesn't qualify for the contest that is fine but I would greatly appreciate any critiques. I haven't done any postwork other than put my name on it so any suggestions in that area would be appreciated. Thanx
Hi AJaxxxe. What you want is the Art Studio Forum. Just Start a thread to post all your Images to and ask for tips and stuff as you go along. This thread is just for people doing Renders for this Contest.
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