Supersuit renders by XoechZ - comments are welcome

XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
edited October 2012 in Art Studio

First try with Supersuit

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  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    another one

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  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    next one

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  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    She is dangerous...

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  • JaderailJaderail Posts: 0
    edited December 1969

    Love me some SuperSuit, Watching thread.

  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    Thank you. Here is another one. I like those reflections :-)

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  • IvyIvy Posts: 1,882
    edited December 1969

    the super suit renders look great

  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    Thank you!

    I am still a noob, but with every render I learn a bit more about how all that stuff works. So, if anyone has suggestions or tips how to make the renders better, please tell me.

  • JaderailJaderail Posts: 0
    edited December 1969

    Tip: Google the Rule of thirds. That one thing will help move you to a new step with your renders.

  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    Thank you Jaderail!

    I have found this article: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rule_of_thirds

    It´s very interesting and I will try that rule in my next render. It would be very helpful (for a beginner like me) to have this guidelines in the cameraview in DAZ. Would make things easier :-)

  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    Ok, this one follows the rule of thirds (as close as I could in a first try). It looks good to me, but on the other side there is so much "empty space" at the right side. That would not happen if the figure was in the middle. What do you think?

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  • JaderailJaderail Posts: 0
    edited December 1969

    The human eye will focus on of center items first. That is how the ROT came about, I think it is very good. My Eye went right to the character.

  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    another hero

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  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    next

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  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    next one.

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  • JaderailJaderail Posts: 0
    edited December 1969

    Very well done, I like the use of the Super boots as well. Great texturing on this one.

  • cridgitcridgit Posts: 823
    edited December 1969

    XoechZ said:
    Ok, this one follows the rule of thirds (as close as I could in a first try). It looks good to me, but on the other side there is so much "empty space" at the right side. That would not happen if the figure was in the middle. What do you think?



    This is my favourite so far. If you don't like the empty space, do something subtle there, something that will draw your eye to the character or contrast with the character either through light/shadow, pose or color. Some ideas: cast the figure's shadow across the empty space, add a painting, plant, window or statue. If you give the statue a subtle tone that blends well with the background, it won't distract from the character but then you can play with a subtle message in the statue's pose.

    Just some ideas to work with.

  • Scott LivingstonScott Livingston Posts: 4,107
    edited December 1969

    Good stuff! I particularly like the guy with the interesting reflections, the one you call "another hero," and the woman at the Moon Gate. The Rule of Thirds is definitely working for you. :)

    The Supersuit is a lot of fun to play with, and I enjoy seeing what others achieve with it. Keep up the good work!

  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited October 2012

    Thank you all for your kind words. Yes, the Supersuit is a lot of fun and opens almost endless possibilities. I really like it and there will be more renders... :-)

    Oh, and if you have any suggestions to improve my renders, please let me know.

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  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    Hm, I wish I could have done this one better. Maybe I´ll try it again when I am more advanced. Or I need some better lights...

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  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    Ok, here I have re-worked my first image from this thread. I think it looks much better now. Not yet perfect, but better.

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  • SzarkSzark Posts: 8,788
    edited November 2012

    XoechZ said:
    Ok, here I have re-worked my first image from this thread. I think it looks much better now. Not yet perfect, but better.
    that is so much better now, everything works. You could have used the arch to frame her and given the colour of the background her suit would have contrasted nicely.

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  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    Thank you!

    I know, it´s a long and hard way to perfection. But at least I´m on the road :-)

  • SzarkSzark Posts: 8,788
    edited December 1969

    XoechZ exactly that is a great attitude and IMHO you are on the road heading in the right direction.

  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    Here my latest. Come and get it - if you dare...

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  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    A new one. Looks like a movie poster.

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  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    Just playing with her new power.

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  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    Another one. Some kind of modern ninja.

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  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited December 1969

    Today something funny:

    His wife said: "You have to take my supersuit if you have to save the world today. Yours is still in the dryer."

    Later this day he really had to save the world. Poor hero. But at least it was easy. All the enemy died under a heavy laughing attack! :-)

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  • XoechZXoechZ Posts: 792
    edited November 2012

    No more comments, suggestions, opinions?

    Ok, never mind. Here is another one. A soldier in a mystical light scene. No postwork on this.

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  • JaderailJaderail Posts: 0
    edited December 1969

    Well, I think you have the Comicbook thing down pat with the Supersuit. Lets see some Fights and stuff now.

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